Monday, September 14, 2009

The Nightmare continues

Something peculiar was there about that house. You rarely come across such area. A temple, a gurudwara and a church all three were in a radius of 10 meters. A mosque was also there but in a radius of 100 meters. Generally you do not accept a peaceful life in area like that. But on a contrary it was just opposite. It was one of the best location to be lived in both socially and spiritually. In midst of that area there was a boys hostel where some IIT aspirants lived. It was a three storey building. Landlord lived on ground floor. First floor was like a store. And boys lived on top floor. There was a big veranda in middle and rooms were side along it. Number of boys living there was 10. It was like a paying guest type where you are bound to eat what ever provided. Ok.... thats different matter.

Some boys went home and five of them were left at that time. They were studying together in a room at around 23:30. Suddenly there was a knock at the door around 00:00. Boys were surprised as all of them were inside the room itself. Then also one of them stood and opened the gate. But no one was there. They thought that it must be their illusion or some one was trying to do majaak with them. So they ignored and continued their study. After 5 minutes there was a knock again. They opened the door to find no one. They got afraid, locked the room again and continued with whatever they were doing. Once again there was a knock but this time it was not just a knock. Someone was hitting the door as hard as possible. Once again they opened the door shivering. Ab unki haalat kharab ho gayi. (I wonder baar baar wo darwaja band kyun kar de rahe the? khula chor dete to knock thode karta koi. sidhe ghus jata. Khair.) Fortunately that was the last knock. They were relieved but no one dared to go to their respective room. So all of them slept together in that room only. They woke up next day to go for their tuition. They returned around 01:00. After returning they informed the landlady about the incident. She thought boys were trying to make fun so she ignored. When landlord returned in evening they told him too. He consolidated that agar aaj raat bhi kuch hua to dekha jayega. Is tarah bacche 12:00 baje se pehle hi ek room me jama ho gaye ki agar kuch hua to ek saath face karenge. At dot 12:00 the knocking started again and I do not want to bore you with the same lines again. Once again they went to landlord next morning. Obviously they were frightened so landlord assured them to be there at the night. He informed one of his friend about the incidence. Till now mentally they were not taking the things seriously. They arranged a bottle of bear, some other liquor and two shisha ke glasses and started drinking in middle of that veranda. Jab unko thodi chadh gayi to chillane lage, kahan ho bhoot bhai samne aao. Basically they were trying to make fun of students. Suddenly clock ticked 12 and one of the glass was in air and moving to and fro in front of the neighbour. He was so much frightened that he began to run to stop only in his house. The landlord also ran to the ground floor. Luckily nothing happened with the boys that night. It was sunday next day. There was no tuition that day. It was only day when days could bath at 08:00. Rest of the days they had tuition so there was no question of bathing. Coming back to the point one of them was in the bathroom. Suddenly something fell in the bathroom. It was a big tiles. He was afraid and tried to escape from bathroom. But alas! bathroom was locked from outside. So he began to hit the door. Hearing the noise other friends came running. They shouted to open the door from inside as it was already open from outside. But it was not opening from inside. Finally they had to break the door to take him out. (Strange. ander wale ko laga ki bahar se band hai aur bahar wale ko laga ki ander se band hai.) Suddenly they noticed the tiles that fell from the top. One of them realised the tiles was lying on roof top since ever they came. (How can something fell with a obstacle in between?)

Search for some BABA began who deals with bhoot, pret. Finally they got one and visit was scheduled that day itself. With his first foot in house he told this place is haunted. He reached veranda, took out a knife, read some mantra aur usko phook diya chaku pe. Then he hold the back of the knife and told us, this knife will point to the bhoots who are present in the house. Firstly knife pointed to the ventilator of a room. He climbed on a table and found something wrapped in a paper. He opened it to find a small piece of bone along with some chawal and sindoor. Two more such packets were found, one in the cup shaped bawl present in the fan and other dug inside the lump of gitti on the roof. In this way all bhoots were captured. BABA took all three of them with himself along with a good amount of money. Till now it is a mystery as to why and from where they came from.

But hats off to those brave boys. Even after going through all this none of them changed the hostel.

6 comments:

  1. Brillent writeup....
    Though i no d whole story but inspite of that i read the from first to last word.... Credit goes to ur way of writing.....
    Well Done...:)

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  2. thanku very much. You are my first fan to appreciate my work. party lene aa jao.

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  3. hey well written dude!
    a nice suspence and a good ending too...

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  4. Is it True or fiction ? If it is true its really incredible . As they say truth is more riveting than fiction .

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  5. @ B2l .....truth is what you believe .. if ecstasy does believe .. ITs true for him !!!111
    I don't.... so its a just a story for me .... even though its quiet a bit of fun !!!


    @ ECStasy ......... first humans ... second ghosts ... what's next .........ALIENS??????

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  6. were you a part of those brave boys?
    ab to paisa bhi kamana chaloo ad aane laga hai

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